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Post  Aquashadowcat on Sat Jun 11, 2011 11:17 am

Heres a couple of my other stories that were written as English coursework in year 10 XD don't ask...

Heavens' Wish / Earths' Desire
The roaring chorus; that peaceful sound; the pure serenity of perpetual whiteness. This is Heaven. Akira was one of the angels in this sanctuary. He had long, soft, white wings and had floor length shimmering golden hair. He wore a white shirt which was open at the neck, white trousers and a pale lilac coat with stars running down the front. He looked no older than possibly twenty four.

He was a renowned novelist, popular amongst everyone for his captivating romance novels. He was worshipped by everyone. Little did the rest of this miraculous host of angels know that Akira was not happy with his current position, though he had everything, he had all of the girls crazy for him, all of the boys jealous, all of the other writers envious of his high status, all of the money he could ever need and more. However, there was still something missing, but he wasn’t sure what this was. It was late at night and he decided to go for a walk. This was heaven so it didn’t get very dark, about the same as dusk here on Earth, nonetheless he went, to the park. No one was around, you wouldn’t expect there to be this late at night. All was quiet, all was calm, Akira saw someone watching over Earth. This man was younger than himself, not much older than eighteen with short light pink hair; he wore a blue shirt and white trousers. This boy’s wings were significantly smaller than his own; he looked like he was crying, but why? Was Earth not a peaceful place to watch?

Akira walked towards the young man and as he did it became clearer that he was crying! Akira ruffled this person’s hair and smiled gently at him who just looked up with a slightly puzzled but relieved face.

“What’s wrong kid?” asked Akira, and then he looked down to Earth, where he saw her, just a normal human girl; she looked exactly like the missing princess…

“I-I-I…” stammered the boy

Akira looked at him blankly and then calmly asked

“What is it?” The boy then took a small crystal on a chain out of his pocket. Akira immediately recognised what this was, he thought there were none left in existence. These small green crystals were the ones that guardian angels used to use to get to Earth for their charges. The boy stood up and wiped the tears off his face,
Akira knocked the crystal out of his hands and said “Are you crazy, only guardian angels use those and once you go you can’t return, what’s wrong with you?” To this, the boy started crying again then ran to pick up the crystal.

“Ferum memoria,” he said. The crystal started glowing, Akira grabbed hold of the crystal but the boy just wouldn’t let go. They were both shrouded in light and the next thing they were plunged into darkness, night time on Earth. The crystal had given then both a human appearance, it had taken their wings away from them. Akira then looked back at the boy who was fear stricken.

“Don’t worry” he said “We still have our wings, we just can’t use them, you got your wish kid, and we are on Earth, go find the princess” The boy turned to Akira and said “Alexiel, my name is Alexiel.” Akira laughed surely to himself then ruffled Alexiel’s hair again. Alexiel didn't see what was so funny so just turned away. The girl they had seen from heaven was walking by, Alexiel wandered off after her.

"Princess Honoka" he said following her. She gave no response just walked a little faster. A heavy rain started to fall, it blocked Alexiel’s vision a little; he could no longer see the girl he was pursuing. He stood in the rain wondering what he should do next when he felt an all too familiar hand on his shoulder. "Akira...I'm sorry" Alexiel started to cry again "I dragged you into this mess, forgive me" Akira sighed then took Alexiel by the wrist and pulled him in to a nearby cafe to get out of the rain. The still crying Alexiel followed without thought. Akira sat Alexiel down in a closed off corner of the cafe, he then ordered them both some drinks. Akira lit up a cigarette and sat smoking until Alexiel stood up. Akira looked at him. Alexiel looked angry; he took the cigarette off Akira and stubbed it out.
"That was my last one" Akira said with a grim look on his face. Alexiel chuckled a little then started to back out of the cafe in fear of what Akira would do next. Akira calmly stood up and backed Alexiel out of the café at a quicker pace. When they were both outside, Alexiel backed into a wall, with no where for him to run. Akira was holding him to the wall by the shoulders, the rain was still falling, it was dark, there was only a single streetlight lighting where they were. Akira leaned in closer to Alexiel’s face. Alexiel’s heart started to race, his face slowly turned a dark shade of red, he was unaware of what was about to happen. Akira was getting ever so closer, Alexiel’s heart beating exceedingly faster. What was going to happen?

There was a sudden flash of light in the sky that stopped them both in their tracks. Akira turned his head towards the light still holding Alexiel against the wall. There stood a man with long flowing silver hair, longer than Akira’s. He looked like royalty - he was perfect. He had a long red coat with frills along the bottom and an air about him that was so majestic heads were bound to turn when he entered a room. Akira recognised who he was straight away.
“Rosiel why are you here?” he asked sharply. Akira had a serious look on his face. Akira had a history with Rosiel, and a not to pleasant one at that. The both of them fought together against the demons in The War of Airi, 10 years ago; the war with the fallen angels who rebelled and wanted to take over heaven, easily recognised by their darkened wings and pale faces. This war was when Princess Honoka disappeared. Little did they know, history was about to repeat itself.


It was a dark night here on earth. If it’s dark you would expect all to be calm and quiet, however, this was not the case. Akira, Alexiel and Rosiel were all standing outside the cafe in the pouring rain. The atmosphere was thickening with heightened emotions; no one knew what was coming next in this stare down between Akira and Rosiel. Who would back down first?
Alexiel looked around in awe of what was happening, he couldn’t believe someone with such arrogance as Rosiel was standing up to someone as cool and collected as Akira. Alexiel’s heart skipped a beat whenever he looked at Akira. He never saw Akira as a famous writer, nor as just another angel, but as a person, as a a friend, maybe even more so. Akira was first to break, he snapped at Rosiel. “What the hell do you want with me?” he asked sharply.
Rosiel’s face lit up, he simply and arrogantly replied “my my, an angel of your calibre speaking of such a place as hell, watch your tongue Akira otherwise you’ll be going straight there.” Then Rosiel smirked as if he were glad to see the back of Akira. This ever thickening atmosphere was making Alexiel feel uneasy he suddenly burst in front of Rosiel. Akira hadn’t seen him this way before; Alexiel would usually sit back and let his elders take any responsibility for anything. However Alexiel had a look of pure anger and hatred on his face, all of it directed towards Rosiel.
“Why are you doing this? Why did you come here?” he asked but before he could get a response he continued “Akira is a great person, he tried to stop me, just a kid he never met before, from coming here even though he had no reason to and now he’s stuck here with me and I don’t refuse to let him take this arrogant attitude of yours without my consent” his face had become saddened as the reality of what was going on sank in. Once again he felt Akira’s warm hand upon his shoulder. He turned his head and his eyes met with Akira’s. All that Alexiel could think about now was how relaxed and deep Akira’s eyes looked compared to usual. His heart started beating faster, he started to tremble at Akira’s touch. Akira felt this and so reassuringly said “you’ve done enough.”

The next time Alexiel opened his eyes, he was no longer outside in the pouring rain but lying down of a sofa in an up-scale city condo. He rubbed his eyes to wake himself up and then wondered why he was all alone. Because he was alone he started to panic and cry that was, until he was hugged from behind by a warm, strong, bare chested figure. Immediately he knew who this was and tried to speak. He couldn’t as he was till crying way too much, he couldn’t utter a word so instead he turned himself around and sat crying into Akira’s chest. Akira did nothing but hold him tightly and keep him safe. It then occurred to Alexiel, what had happened to Rosiel? Was he dead? Did he go back to heaven? It was then when something unexpected happened; Rosiel walked in to the room and made the worst possible assumption.
“Akira you didn’t?” he asked expecting the exact opposite. Akira glared at him as he released Alexiel from his embrace. Rosiel pulled his sleeves up as he was expecting a fight but instead Akira calmly said “I did not” Rosiel smirked arrogantly and remarked
“Everybody else would have”. Akira’s eyes grew angrier by the second, he was regretting letting Rosiel into his house. He felt someone tugging on him from behind and turned to see Alexiel’s melancholy face staring up at him with tears in his eyes. He started to leave the room and simply said “I am not everyone and everyone is not me”, with that he left.

Alexiel had decided to go for a walk to find the girl he believed to be the princess, he thought that if he went back to the place he first saw her that she might be there again. However it was not meant to be, he waited for hours in the street all alone. It was getting late and was getting cold, Alexiel thought he should return to the condo. He entered the building and all at once smoke emulsified the room. Coughing slightly from the thick cloud of nicotine he walked into the lounge where he saw a scene to shatter his heart into a million pieces. Akira and Rosiel lay bare and intertwined on the sofa, both with cigarettes in hand. Alexiel couldn’t take it anymore and so he ran out. The darkness gripped his heart as the sun that lit his life eclipsed as the choking hands of despair gripped him ever tighter. He ran and he kept running until he could run no more, he collapsed to the floor in a heap of tears. Why? Why would Akira do that? Akira hates Rosiel, it makes no sense. And then almost as if some kind of manna had shone upon him there stood the girl looking upon him like he was a lost puppy.
Yeah This one is in progress still ><

This is the unrevised version sorry i lost the better one so here's the original draft

Blood. I could smell it a mile off, but never did I think I’d smell the blood of my parents. At first I thought my father might have been thirsty, that happens to us vampires. But as I could also smell my father’s blood with my mothers, I told Lynxie to stay hidden and went to investigate. A chill shot down my spine as I saw then, lying there, motionless.......dead. I couldn’t move, but as I heard Lynxie’s shrill scream, I assumed the worst and locked myself in the closet to try and stay safe. After what seemed like hours of sitting in there, crying, I heard gunshots before total silence, again I was alone, or so I thought. The door was kicked down and I looked up to see a man, not much older than myself.
“Oi oi, you one of ‘em?” he asked, without even looking at me. I gave no reply; he then turned around only to be confronted with a pair of eyes, my eyes, glowing...........blood red.

Things then took a turn for the worst as I was pushed back to the ground and his gun aimed at my head
“Would you?” I said “would you honestly kill me because of what I am?” He gave no answer, just put his gun away and left. Unsure of what I should do, I followed him.
“The full moon will be out shortly, you’ll want to be careful” I reminded him. He stopped but didn’t turn to face me.
“You, what’s your name?” he asked, but before I could give an answer he had turned around in an angry rage, grabbed my shoulders and yelled “TELL ME!”
“Aqua” I replied calmly “my name is Aqua”
“I’ve heard your clan” he said with a melancholy look on his face, I looked down “I thought you had been annihilated in that battle 100 years ago” he said. Something didn’t feel right; this guy was trembling, his breath getting warmer every second.
“Run” he ordered me, I looked up his eyes were yellow, his pupils dilated.
“GOD DAMMIT RUN!” he screamed
“I can take care of myself Dogboy” I said arrogantly and then just sat on a bench nearby. I looked up at the moon before looking back at what now was a werewolf, before I knew what had happened I felt a warm breath on the back of my neck. I chuckled a little to myself. That was until I felt a sharp pain in my shoulder. Once again I smelled the sweet scent of blood in the air, only this time, my blood.

The smell of blood captivates any vampire and even though it was my own I just couldn’t help myself. Being the kind of vampire I am, I get active powers based around elements. Mother had earth, Father had air. My sister Lynxie had the power I always secretly wanted. A power I never thought she would be able to control. Fire. I had the power of water and could control it in any form. Solid, liquid or gas. I had grown to develop my powers to an almost unattainable level, to a level that could kill. The werewolf had loosened his grip and I sought my opportunity to attack. I pulled the moisture out of the air and sharpened it to a blade before striking his leg. The last thing I wanted to do was kill the man who had saved my life. He fell to the floor howling in pain. The blood was still pouring out of my shoulder so I covered the wound in water before freezing it over. A flare gun fired into the air before two people ran towards me and the injured werewolf. I had lost so much blood that my vision had deteriorated and I couldn’t really see who these people were. From what I could make out one was a man wearing all black and the other, a boy a little younger than myself wearing pale brown and holding a gun at the werewolf. I begged these people not to hurt the werewolf before I completely passed out, what was going to happen next I didn’t know.

A repeated beeping sound flowed into my ear and I opened my eyes to see the boy who I had seen the night before.
“Miss Aqua, um are you okay?” he asked with a slightly worried look in his eye. How he knew my name I didn’t know, unless that werewolf had said something. I gave no reply just looked at him and smiled to reassure him. A man walked in wearing a long white coat, I guessed he must have been a doctor or something. He whispered to the boy who then left in a hurry. I looked at the empty doorframe where the boy had left.
“He’ll be back, he’s gone to fetch his superiors” the doctor said assertively. I sat up and held my head in my hands as I was still dizzy. The boy then ran back into the room with a smile on his face, shortly followed by the man I had seen before and a woman slightly younger than him.
“Yo!” said the man “I’m Kai, this is Mia and you’ve already met Leo”. The doctor cleared his throat as if to say ‘what about me’, Kai looked at him then turned back and said “meh and this is Neo”. I laughed a little before noticing where I was. I was in a hospital. Me, a vampire, in a hospital? This can’t be good.

A look of panic ht my face before I was given a glass of water by Leo. Kai hit him around the head then said that vampires don’t drink water. I laughed then saw that everyone was looking at me with a confused look on their faces.
“Um, excuse me miss, but what is so funny?” Mia asked. I thought to myself for a moment before sighing and realizing that I was going to have to explain everything to them. So I did, I told them everything. Vampires are not extinct like everyone seems to think. When they asked about vampires I found myself explaining practically everything there is to know.
“That’s pretty interesting Miss Aqua” said Leo
“Psch whatever” remarked Kai
“Kai, mind your manners” said Neo
Two people entered the room, I looked at them. They looked a lot older than me, and definitely a lot cooler. They were wearing all black and just had weapons; they looked like ninja or something. The man, he had guns and a halberd. The woman had a kunai holster and a katana.
“Sorry were late dude” said this man, then he turned to me and made a gun shape with his hand and pointed it at me “bang, I’m Dax” he said. I didn’t know what to say, this guy was kinda weird. Then the woman laughed to herself before turning and saying
“Hi, I’m Joy” I didn’t want to be rude but I didn’t understand why everyone was introducing themselves to me, so I asked Neo. Before Neo could answer me Dax turned to me and yelled
“ARE YOU STUPID WOMAN!” then he sighed as if to calm himself and said
“Lynxie, we’re gonna find Lynxie.

Hope (sequel to Purity)
“Lynxe” said Dax “we’re going to find Lynxe. I looked at Dax with a confused, blank look on my face as if to say ‘she’s alive’? The room was silent. Joy cleared her throat to end the silence
“So Aqua is on our squad right?” asked Leo
“HELL NO!” yelled Kai. Neo chuckled a little.
“She’s with us” he said “her skills are far too good to be wasted on your team”
Kai started yelling again and almost attacked Neo until Mia and Leo pulled him away. He left in an angry rage followed by the two of them and Joy and Dax laughed.
“Okay team, to the graveyard!” yelled Dax
By now it was late into the night. As we approached the graveyard I started to get scared. Even though I had been given some kunai and a wakizashi to protect myself and I was with three people a lot older and more skilled than myself, I couldn’t help but feel a little scared. We approached the big iron gates of the graveyard, the wind whistling through the trees, the rustling of leaves beneath my feet. I looked up at the moon, it was full and it was red. I knew something bad would happen because of this blood moon.
“I want to go back” I said with a scared look on my face. Dax didn’t turn, just laughed as the others tried to comfort me.
“Big vampire scared of a little graveyard huh?” he said arrogantly before walking into the graveyard and out of sight. Joy ran in after him. Neo watched her leave then turned to me.
“You okay?” he said. I took a deep breath to calm myself then nodded with a determined look on my face. I then heard what sounded like a growling coming from inside before one of Dax’s flares hit the sky. Neo ran off into the graveyard and I reluctantly followed him. To no surprise of mine Dax and Joy had been ambushed by a horde of vampires.
“Kill them all!” Dax yelled. I yawned then walked into the centre if the horde who all stopped and looked at me. They saw my eyes glowing red and tried to escape. But it was too late. All of these vampires had immediately disintegrated...because of me. Everyone looked at me puzzled.
“Okay new rule, nobody piss off Aqua” Joy said

“Piss her off all you like, it’ll be fun” someone said. The voice sounded familiar. It was Lynxe. All of a sudden a fireball smashed into the ground. Dax, Neo and joy readied their weapons
“Leave it” I said “this one’s mine”. Lynxe jumped down from the church rooftop, her eyes glowing bright blue. Never in my life did I think that my sister would have acquired such a level of power, power that I couldn’t even imagine. I pulled some water out of the air and fired it towards Lynxe. The fire she shot back just evaporated the water
“Such a shame sis, I always looked up to you, I thought you were stronger than this” she said. She had a look on her face that I had never seen before. How could my cute twin sister, who had always been so good and pure now, have such a look of pure evil on her face? What had happened? Was it because I left her?
Lynxe showed no mercy, she made clones of herself out of fire. At first I thought the smart thing to do would to fight back with clones made out of water but if her power seriously was as good as it seemed, I would have to use my secret power. Lynxe hit the floor. Everyone wondered what had happened, everyone except me. Dax looked over at me and saw that my eyes were glowing ferociously and that my arm was stretched out towards Lynxe. Because I can control water, I also have the ability to control blood so I had taken control of Lynxes blood to force her to the ground. The impact forced Lynxes clones to disappear.
“Don’t make me do this Lynxe, don’t make me have to hurt you” I pleaded
“You should have thought about that before you left me all alone” she replied. I felt the ground heat up but if i moved Lynxe would be free. So i held my ground. The floor glowed orange as the fire rose to where i was stood, but still i held my position. I looked away, i was hoping that Lynxe wouldn’t kill me, and then i felt something pull me out of the way and to the floor. I looked up to see Dax.
“WHY THE HELL DID YOU DO THAT!” I yelled. He gave no response just pulled me to my feet and aimed a gun at Lynxe then said to her
“What is wrong with you, you could have killed her just now” but Lynxe didn’t care about anyone else, she got annoyed and shot a plume of fire at Dax. I wasn’t about to let her hurt anyone even though Dax had interfered when I said not to so I fired a blast of water back. The powers were at equal strength and this created a thick fog over the graveyard. No one could see, that was except for me and Lynxe, being vampires our eyes can detect other vampires. Then i sensed something strange, there were more vampires, too many to count.
“You three had better be ready for a tough fight” I said to Dax but I saw no point in fighting this battle, with three humans and a vampire, the odds against Lynxe and countless other vampires were really low.
“Forget that get everybody ou...” I was interrupted by a sharp pain in my chest.
“Lynxe, why?” I felt my blood pouring out of my mouth before collapsing to the floor

XD so uhm that's about it for now I guess.


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